雅思寫作，考官喜歡的複雜句怎麼寫？

雅思寫作中運用不同語法結構是很重要的，很多烤鴨好像自動把“寫作”和“大作文”劃上了等號。其實不然，

在小作文的評分標準中，同樣也有語法的維度，

一起來看看：

雅思小作文評分標準

5分：僅能使用有限的語法結構→

句式重複較多

6分：綜合使用簡單句式與複雜句式→

可以使用一些簡單句+複雜句

7分：運用各種複雜的語法結構→

靈活使用，而不是一味使用最長、最難的句式

從評分標準裡我們可以看出，

想要得到6分及以上的評價，就得刻意去使用更多複雜的句型

。簡單來說，簡單句就是隻有一套主謂的句子，比如：

John wanted a decent IELTS band score。

而

複雜句型就包括從句、倒裝、被動等各種句式

，其實考官期待看到的複雜句型，和我們作為學習者理解的複雜句型，會有所出入。

為了避免同學們走彎路，今天就來教大家如何把小作文中的簡單句有效延長成考官喜歡的複雜句！讓你們的作文成功升級起碼一個level！

01

連詞

2008 pass rates in Business， Science and Maths and Engineering were considerably lower in 2008 than in 2012，

so

the greastest level of improvement took place in these disciplines（科目）。

這種句式是利用

連詞

將兩個句子連線在一起，通常連詞的用法沒有什麼限制，要注意的就是根據使用場景：

■ 表

原因結果

，連線宏觀的規律和微觀資料

■ 表

轉折讓步

，進行正反資訊的對比

■ 表

單純並列

，羅列若干同類資訊

其它的連詞還有

and、or、although、because、while、whereas等

，透過連片語成複雜句式是比較容易的手段，再舉幾個例子：

■ In contrast， the amount in Poland was 10 million initially，

and

then is increased slightly to 11 million before decreasing almost back to the figure in 1980， at 9。9 million。

■ Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities （around 150 grams），

while

much less fish was consumed （just over 50 grams）。

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2

介詞

At

just over 80% in 2012 and 70% in 2018， averagepass rates among Computer Science students were by far the highest。

這種是用了

介詞

，使得

句子只用了一套主謂結構的同時，保留了兩個資訊點

。其它推薦使用的介詞還有in/on/from。。。to。。。/between/by/until/with/for/at等。再感受一下其用法：

■ The percentage change between the two years was clearly the most marked for those studying Business，

from

a modest 20% in 2008

to

a considerably higher level （50%） in 2012。

■ In 1979， beef was the most popular of these food，

with

about 225 grams per person per week。

03

定語從句

2008 pass rates in

Business, Science, and

Maths and Engineering

were considerably lower in 2008 than in 2012，

which

means that the greatest level of improvement took place in these disciplines。

對，這就是同學們都愛使用的

定語從句

，也是很好的組成複雜句的手段之一：

■ People in Turkey spent on food， drinks and tobacco with the largest percentage，

which

was 32。14%。

■ In 2009， personal needs and unexpected problems were each cited by around 10% of people，

both of which

grew to around 20% ten years later。

04

賓語從句

The chart provides

i

n

formation

about how many employees were away from work in three different years and the reasons given。

這個句型叫

賓語從句

，

常見於小作文的開頭段，通常在對題目進行改寫時使用

，其它的替換表達還有：The diagram/table/figure/illustration/graph + indicates/represents/shows/outlines。。。 比如：

■ The pie charts compare the

distribution of water usage for different purposes among local residen

ts during the period from 1988 to 2008.

■ The bar charts illustrates

changes in the electricity rates in four states in Australia.

05

形式主語從句

It is noticeable that

for both types of household with children， a higher than average proportion were living in poverty at this time。

這種句型叫

形式主語從句

，可以用來

描述一些細節資訊或者比較明顯的特徵

，同學們還可以寫：It is obvious that。。。/It is interesting to note that。。。

■

It is also interesting to note that

almost all showed a decrease in 1994 in amount of goods transported except for the pipeline， which actually peaked in that year。

06

There be句型

There is

a sharp rise in the next hour to reach its maximum before collapsing again to a lower level by the end of the day。

用

There be句型

非常適合用來

描寫小作文中的客觀資料，表示“有”或者“存在”的意思。

其它的例子還有：

■

There were

no figures given for male part-time workers， but female part-time had forty hours of leisure time， only slightly more than women in full-time employment， perhaps reflecting their work in the home。

07

被動句

By 2005， the time

needed

to produce a car had descended to just 21 hours。

被動句

也是小作文中很常用、且較易上手的複雜句式之一，

當描述物件是物體或流程時經常用到

，舉幾個例子：

■ Meanwhile， timber was the most popular product in 1980 but two decades later

paper was produced

more than the others。

■ By creating an enclosed（封閉的） environment， the

lid（蓋子） on the top must be closed

so there would be no smoke letting out。

08

倒裝句

After entering the venue， customers could see a cash desk on the right and

in front of them were

several round tables arranged in a circle。

倒裝句

也是適合使用的複雜句式之一，

常用在地圖題當中

，比如：

■ In the southeast and west part

were many shop

s opened

along new roads on both sides。

■ In the west

was a river running

from north to south。

建議同學們如果想在考場上使用倒裝句，私下練習時一定

要確保句子的結構是正確的

，拿不準的可以找專業人士批改一下，切記“半桶水”上考場，模稜兩可地寫哦~

複雜句真的沒有大家想得那麼難~但是也不能掉以輕心，犯下過多的錯誤，所以建議同學們可以

仿照在上面列出的句子，進行一定量的改寫練習

，看自己比較擅長哪些，在考場上發揮它們的優勢哦！